November 25, 2011
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The effort was agonizing. Fear, confusion, thirst and the surreal brightness of the place numbed his mind. She was holding up better than him and he hung on to her and was ready to hold her pack if needed. The eyes were everywhere…..everywhere. They were watched with every shuffling step they took. Some showed no real interest but others were strange and menacing. He knew they would soon need food but they had to keep going. The sparse foliage they passed was tall and rich but bore no fruit. They passed statues of strange beings and objects that often made little or no sense to this place.
Thirst…..gnarling thirst was tormenting his throat. She was stoic and concealed her own discomfort.
“I can’t take this much longer, I’m dying,” he groaned. “Food, I need food. I’m so weak now I can hardly walk!”
“You crybaby!!” she replied. “You started complaining as soon as we parked the car. After Sears, then we’ll go to the food court, okay!?”
Comments (7)
LOL! That would definitely be me! I’m no shopper, especially on Black Friday!
Oh my god that is so funny.
ROFL
This story looks dramatic and describes a strange world , surrealist ; the death’s kingdom ?
In friendship
Michel
I’m with him. I would have passed out from stress before I got into the car to leave home.
lol
LOL I’m no shopper either. Give me the comfort of my sofa and my laptop and I can buy whatever I need for the holidays! ROFL